ext_84459 ([identity profile] action-antihero.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] agirllost 2005-05-15 09:58 pm (UTC)

Jack waits for the back door to close, then with one swift movement he crosses the hall.

Ramon's turning to the other man, looking like he's about to tell him something, when Jack fires his first shot, right through the goon's head. Ramon spins around, his eyes widening in shock as he sees Jack.

Now it's Jack's turn to smile, as he takes a couple steps forward, allowing Ramon this one moment of shock before the end. "Looks like I get my chance after all," Jack says, before squeezing the trigger.

He has a moment to watch Ramon crumple to the floor, a red stain growing on his shirt, and listen to him try to catch his breath through lungs filling with blood; a moment, until he hears gunfire outside.

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